Jesus' love

Jesus' love

A Poem by Missy Moooooo
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Its a religion piece. :)

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No more struggling to be me
I can be me through Christ,
through Christ, our Lord.
He doesn't judge
He isn't difficult.

Christ our Lord Jesus
was sent down to earth
to die for us
to have everlasting love.

Too many people
don't understand, nor-believe
but I know;
Jesus Christ's love is wonderful,
 He accepts' them who believe.

Religion is everywhere
so many people don't believe
and so many do.
Us Christian's we need
to stick together
and grow the word of God.

We can help people
heal their hurt,
through the word of God.
No, God doesn't talk to us
but we have proof,
look at nature.
It's beautiful,
and an image of God.
We also have the Bible
a fantastic book.
No, I have not read it all;
but I will, I have experienced
Jesus' love and I will forever share it.


 

© 2012 Missy Moooooo


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Well, I'm not much of a poetry critic, so my opinion doesn't rate too high. Still I think what you have here is decent, straight from the heart. I don't necessarily agree with all of it, but who cares what I think. I do think that, "Us Christians we need..." could be better as, "We Christians need..." I know others will disagree.

I'm new in here and not sure of the rating process, so I think I'll hold off this time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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awesome poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amen! to this amazing piece. The Bible is the most precious book in the world, holds wisdom, truth, love and history. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I'm not much of a poetry critic, so my opinion doesn't rate too high. Still I think what you have here is decent, straight from the heart. I don't necessarily agree with all of it, but who cares what I think. I do think that, "Us Christians we need..." could be better as, "We Christians need..." I know others will disagree.

I'm new in here and not sure of the rating process, so I think I'll hold off this time.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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