Sorrow

Deep dark eyes

stare off into

the darkness.

Not saying

a word

why must life be so

 hard to handle?

Almost so hard

there’s no happiness.

Nothing to wear

a smile for;

No one to make

you laugh

no want to be

here in this world.

Water dances off their faces

while allowing the darkness

to eat their souls,

they will soon

take the route,

more pain

and more sorrow will form.

No one can stop them

but them self.

No one knows their

weaknesses more then them.

They just end it.

Reviews

[No name]

A very emotional piece that was well written. Thanks for sharing.

[jjustH]

I really liked this. I felt the emotions. Keep writing =p

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. I can feel the passion within this piece. I loved the emotions within it. You did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

[Me]

wonderful

[Hoosier Belle]

I really can feel this write from your heart, This is quite amazing.
I like the emotions in this.

Well dear, I think you have very good potential to be an awesome writer. I see here for your age a lot of good lines. They are out of the heart, as I felt them, and I feel the message in between your words. Very good! Keep on penning! xx

[Kelly N]

I like this. :)