Doubt Talking

I can't say anything anymore
perfection is the limit.
Scared for losing you
happy for having you
I'm your angel
or so you say.
We can talk for hours
without a care for
the loss of time.
My friends tell you they'll hurt
you if you hurt me.
So far we've been great
but only one week...
we've been.
Things may change
perhaps just doubt talking
because I know for certain
that I'm falling in love with you.

Reviews

[Emrick]

This verse is both funny and lovely.
Doubting is not bad. You can't place your all faith in someone you just met.

[Derek Nall]

Just have to push all the doubts away sometimes and dive in...i like it!

[Missy Moooooo]

Well in this case, the doubt talking was extremely correct. So I don't care. But so correct sometimes you have to be able to go head first diving INtosomething. In the end it may change yourlife .

[MandaBear]

I love this poem I wish you all the best =)

[Missy Moooooo]

Thanks amanda

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I know this feeling a little to well! I love this poem a lot, and just be careful if this is what your going through, I dont want to see you hurt.

[Missy Moooooo]

I really do not think Ryan will hurt me though twin, you know? But there is still that what if. But I really do love him. and he better not hurt me. Or he will be answering to many angry people. You including

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I know hun but just be careful is all I ask. I love you twin your my sis and I dont wanna see you hurt. And you got that right no one and I mean no one wil hurt you cause he will answer to me.

[Missy Moooooo]

Meeeee Point, and I know Twinny

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

:)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Aw, Mellie, I loved this!!:)

[Missy Moooooo]

Thank you so much Maggie :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

You're very welcome(:

[Missy Moooooo]

I worked so hard On this

[❤ Maggie ❤]

It's very good!! I really liked it:))

[Missy Moooooo]

Thanks :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

:)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

Nice idea......good!

[Missy Moooooo]

Thank you. :P