Pecan Pie

Time is right

In this beautiful night

As I think of you

In this big wide world

 

You make me shiver

Butterflies all over

Making me tingle

I feel it all over

 

Words cannot express

Emotions I am going through

Have me feeling high

Thinking I can fly

 

'Oh I can fly

It is you who makes it alright

Know when I'm fallling

You will pick me up

Taking me to a different level

All of that with a pecan pie

Author's Note

Needs work, but something that came in mind. An emotion I am feeling <3

Reviews

[Rachel Caroline Mitchel..]

Very raw, but in mostly a good way; as in raw emotion. There are a couple places where you might look into replacing a word (i.e. using over to rhyme with over). It definitely evokes a sense of that first love kind of feeling. I like it!

[Missiannelli]

Thank you very much for the review! I see what you are referring to. Will definitely use another word to replace it. Again, thank you!