what I came for

what I came for

A Poem by Miss Christine

 

it’s easy to forget what I came for
the one true thing I know
I’ve forgotten already
 
the power of my voice
the strength of my body
the gentleness of my own touch
these things I take for granted
every day
 
my breath comes regularly
and I take no notice
it’s as if I am not breathing at all
so that when I hear the sigh of my own breath
it is a profound surprise
 
it’s easy to forget what I came for
but it is always there somewhere:
the breath
the touch
the power
 
the one true thing I know
and am always discovering:
my breath
my touch
my power

 

I look at you
peaceful, open, sacred
and choose to be reminded
you are a lighthouse in the fog of my forgetting
 
it takes courage to look
it takes courage and strength
and a deep and simple willingness
to see myself
 
this is what I came for
 
this voice I rush to quiet
this body I so often disagree with
this power to choose my life
 
it’s easy to forget what I came for
but the remembering—
it opens me
it embraces me
it swallows me whole
the remembering becomes me
I brand my name on my own skin
with the fire of my remembering
 
I am what I came for

© 2008 Miss Christine


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I agree this poem is very powerful.

"A lighthouse in the fog of my forgetting"

wonderful line

the message in the poem is important. Keep doing what you do.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful poem... I love how you have touched so many others with your words through this poem by the other comments. That is what Lavender Power is all about...Healing and helping others heal through our own natural talents.

Safe Hugs
www.LavenderPower/org

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My dear unknown friend; I am pleased to have stumbled across you.

What you have described is where I ought to start, and branding myself me is a dream I had from the very start, but I too forgot.

I am Solst, formally known as Matthew.

Your writing is very stimulating and helps set me free.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are a lighthouse in the fog of my forgetting.......this is one of the most out standing lines of the whole work......this was an excellent read and will be added to my favorites..........

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Typical when I see repetitions like this I find them clumsy or heavy handed, but I can't say that in this case at all since you use them like a coda or a statement.

"I look at you
peaceful, open, sacred
and choose to be reminded
you are a lighthouse in the fog of my forgetting"

"A lighthouse in the fog of my forgetting" now that's what I call a great line. Gorgeous.

I love the message of this poem since its a true one that applies to me and most of us really. We take ourselves and our lives for granted; being caught in the day to dayness of our existence we forget that we are truly glorious creatures, unique in our own loveliness.

Thank you for the reminder. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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