So Simple

Written after OAT testing last year...I was bored.

She sits in the darkness letting it all sink in
She got in to deep and couldn't swin
She used to be so strong until she fell
She almost reached Heaven but now lives in Hell
Farewell to those who thought they knew her
Farewell to pretending she was so secure
Farewell to who cared for her broken soul
Farewell to the pain is her only goal
Hidden in the shadows was an injured girl
Hidden behind a smile was a whole other world
Hidden from all who'll never know
Hidden scars she would never let show
Life used to be so perfect and right
Life became an everyday fight
Life is a battle she'll lose before morning
Life made her this way, death ends her mourning
Such sweet sacrifice each time she had lied
Such sweet ending now so sweet suicide
Such sweet satisfaction from the cuts she had made
Such sweet debt now to be paid
Ending years of hurt and shame
Ending thoughts of who was to blame
Ending days that were dark and dull
Ending her life was so simple.

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

i wish i was capable of draining somebody's pain!
i will not say anything but "i've been there"... i can feel every word crashing deep into my heart!
the poem is neat...but the pain is horrible!

just...
know that there comes a small moment of happiness sooner or later thats bares such ecstasy it soothes the pain!
it will not take them away... just make them better by the day!
i hope that moment comes fast for you as i wish so for myself!

keep up the good work!

[An owl on the moon]

A brilliant write full of the darkness and depth... You capture so well the emotion and pain of one facing the end. The path I was on for so long. And your pattern is like an intricate tapestry. Well done!

[Fantasyfairy]

Such a sad poem. So full of pain, and hurt. Nicely written though hun, well done. XX

[Tonya (the Night Writer..]

So sad. : (
It might be simple for the person who's doing it but not for the ones left behind that love her.
I hope this is all fiction.