2:09

No one understands why I love to write while sitting on the kitchen floor at all hours...

not a whisper to be heard

not a word to be said

no bitter rage to be exchanged

and not a tear to be shed

sitting here, all alone

on the kitchen floor

Reviews

[Bran the Broken]

brief, simple, and eloquent. brilliantly captures the 'suspended animation' of a random moment. beautiful.

[Wildecat]

I've did some pretty good writing on my kitchen floor too. Nice write.

[An owl on the moon]

Peace is so hard to come by these days, and you express a perfect place and time to find it... Sometimes those common places hold just the right amount of comfort to help us be at rest. Brilliant!

Craig

[clau]

I write on my computer table, I stare outside and I am emotionless until I get a idea.
I enjoyed your poem, it was short but there is a mysterious tone to it I can not grasp. Very mysterious and somehow dark.

[Lexy]

I think writing on the kitchen floor makes sense, and I write on my bed, or in my mind while I'm showering.
So, did you write this @ 2:09?
Sometimes, short poems say something better than the longest ones. Good job! :)

[Partha]

Don't always speak of it
When in sorrow or in pain
If your silence won't sway them
Then words are in vain.

don't know why, but I felt it's perfectly relevant with your poem.