You Changed Me. You Saved Me.

I couldn't change this feeling if i tried

If i jumped off a building and plumited

Not even my death could bring such numbness

Bringing me up from the dust

You changed me. You saved me.

My clumsy personality is silenced by such security

Your arms, not a house but a home

Your eyes, a portal, an audience

Never judge, only admire.

Sparkling in the moonlit darkness of your soul.

Flashlight of my life

Scaring my monsters away

My only wish is that you stay

 

Author's Note

Basically a rough draft of a poem I wrote.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

So deep! I love it. It's very relatable to me. And the feelings are powerful here. It's very well-written. =D Simply wonderful!

[Emily Shae]

This is a good draft. I really like the expressions used. The emotion was evident.