Bottles

Bottles

A Poem by Liz

I am shaken from sleep
By the sounds of 
Breaking.

I stumble in the 
Dark
To find him,
Shattered as his
Bottles.

He is gone,
Into a state of
Freedom and
Bliss.

He is so free,
In fact, 
That he won't even
Hear me when I ask,
"Is it
'Whenever you want,'
Yet?"

© 2010 Liz


Author's Note

Liz
I wrote this at 4:30 in the morning, so it's probably got a lot of errors. I was really resistant to putting this up on here, but I figured what the hell.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This reminds me of my dad, on a drinking binge, though I'm not sure what this is inspired by, thats just what came to mind. Thank you for sharing, i love the style in which you write your poetry.

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

131 Views
1 Review
Added on August 15, 2010
Last Updated on August 15, 2010

Author

Liz
Liz

OR



About
So yeah more..

Writing
Shapes Shapes

A Poem by Liz


Rapids Rapids

A Poem by Liz


Firsts Firsts

A Story by Liz