Elevating Surge

When I get upset about ignorance and how much of it is unnecessary, I scream, rather than at people I just do it on paper!

MY MIND ELEVATES
THE THOUGHT OF
ETERNAL LIFE EMINATES
WHILE MY SOUL ELIMINATES
ALL UNWANTED BEINGS
BRINGING ME TO MY KNEES
AND LETTING ME SEE
THE UNWANTED TRUTH
HOW BLACK BECOMES BLUE
AND ALTHOUGH BOTH
COLORS ARE DARK
THEY ARE HUES YOU CAN
ULTIMATLEY SEE RIGHT THROUGH
TRUE COLORS OF SOCIETY
BRING MY LEVEL OF HIGH
DOWN TO UTTER SOBRIETY
MAKING ME BELIEVE
I MAY HAVE BEEN DEALT
THE WRONG DESTINY
SOMETIMES I THINK ITS
THE DEVIL HIMSELF
GETTING THE BEST OF ME

(C) 2007

Reviews

[kollaboratyve]

sobering and warm to the touch! I thought it should have been longer.

[universalove]

It is so natural to love perfection but in order to have it one must deal with both. positive and neagative. it lets you know how great you reallly are. i may be wrong but to be right is just a thought. good poem