Neverland

"Think of all the joy you'll find, when you leave the world behind."

I'll be Wendy, you'll be Peter Pan

Come with me,

off to Neverland

Up and away we go

Summer sky,

flying low

Stars dot the velvet skies

though none more bright,

than your golden eyes

Take me to the place where they never grow old

Sprinkled with fairy dust,

and painted with gold

Show me your world Peter,

and grant me my freedom

 for no taste is sweeter

You must teach me how to fly

and help me count,

the stars in the sky

Kiss me under the ocean waves

and teach me how to whisper,

in secret caves

Tell me why the hills catch fire,

in the morning,

when the sun gets higher

Show me the mermaids and their shimmering tails,

and prove to me

why true love never fails

I'll never know another's kiss

and I'll finally let my heart

feel true bliss

Tuck me in safely every night,

and i'll hold your hands,

ever so tight

We're so high now Peter, don't let go

I'll always love you, this I know

High above the world we were soaring,

the first time you said

"Second star to the right, and straight on 'till morning." 

Author's Note

A lot of work went into this. Let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[Fish]

This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I've always loved Pet Pan (I'm sure just about everyone does...) and this was just such an easy-flowing, sweet, and well, at this point I'm just ready to list all the Synonyms of "beautiful". :)
I love your work ^_^
~Fish Myrseth

[MissJenaBlair]

Aw thank you! I love your work too! This is probably the poem that I put the most work and thought into. I'm glad you liked it! :)

[Fish]

^_^, well it was time + work well spent :) just a beautiful poem :)

[disheveledApathy]

Oh my goodness. This gave me the tingles, which only happens when I read a really really really good poem. This is so amazing, I always believed in Peter Pan when I was little, and I kept wondering why he didn't show up at my window. ;) I still do.

[MissJenaBlair]

I know exactly what you mean! I always had a bit of a crush on Peter Pan! And thank you so much :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Nice and mellow! so vivid! :)

[MissJenaBlair]

thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)

[zainul]

I love the wonderful work.
Congratulations!!!

[MissJenaBlair]

thank you! :)

[zainul]

Welcome! :)

[FallenRain]

AMAZING! :D

[MissJenaBlair]

aw thankss

[RavenWells]

This was a beautiful piece. It told a sweet story, and took the reader on a journey. Your use of imagery was very good. I only have one note for you and that is that the letter I in I'll needs to be capitalized in the sentence "I'll hold you hands, ever so tight.". Good job :)

[MissJenaBlair]

thank you! :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think it is wonderful, a very enjoyable read.

[MissJenaBlair]

thank you! i'm glad you liked it :)

[Andorianskye]

i liked this

[MissJenaBlair]

thank you soooo much :)