Hell's Fire

Based on my day..

Self doubt Burn's inside me every time
It burns like hell's fire when ever I try
to stand up for myself against those who hate me for the weirdness that is mine
I do not know why
I guess they like to torture me
each time I'm against a wall
I want to tell them to leave me be
yet every time I lose the courage and just try not to fall
So the hell fire in my chest remains
till the day I say I've had enough
It travel's like fire through my veins
Yet it refuses be released, like a mother wolf holding her pup by her scruff
I await that day in silent anticipation
And in silent trepidation

Author's Note

Yeah, I haven't had the best of days.. No flames guys, please and thank you!!

Reviews

[Pax]

very sad... and heartfelt my friend..
I'm blown away with your imagery and fire...
great job!!!

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you! I really appreciate what you've said! :)

[KAREN]

Heartfelt, very emotion, excellent work!

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you so much!! :)

[khalid]

that is a really great poem. nice words picking symbols and metaphors

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you very much i appreciate this!! :)

[Larry Dyson]

I think my "getting even" poem should be a muse for you...describes how I read this submission..bye the way its good..your submission.laury

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you!

[RachelReaper]

I hope those people burn in your hellfire the second you unleash it, this made me upset to think that people would do that to you... why anyone would do that to anybody?! It just never made sense to me...

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you, I appreciate what you've said :)

[Sami Khalil]

I await that day
in silent anticipation.
Nice write.

[MissEpic2902]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Soul Fire]

wow powerful...sad...and horrid events

[MissEpic2902]

Yeah, Thank you for your review!

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome

[MissEpic2902]

:)