You

When I saw you my tummy turned to knots

When I smelt you my head went dizzy

When I felt you I went limp

When I loved you my heart leapt

 

When I met you

You became my stars

I couldn’t have a world without stars

My eyes just saw stars

 

When I found out I loved you

There was nothing better

There was only you and me

Now you’re here forever

 

I can’t think

I can’t talk

I trip when I walk

All I know, is that its you that saved me

You that makes me go crazy

You that made my stars

You are the one I love

Reviews

[Haifa]

I found this nice, sweet and cute poem. I liked it. I like the last 2 lines for most, its like a happy ending.