Closer

Closer

A Poem by MissChild

As you look at me do you understand me?

Do you understand how I think?

Or why I look like I do?

Do you know why you see the pain in my eyes?

Or why I can’t sleep at night?

 

Take a guess, and let me know

You never know when I might just go

You never know when you might be right

So take another look

Peak a little closer

 

I promise I won’t snap

It might hurt you more than me

Maybe it’s worth a try

Go ahead

You never know

 

See the pain

See the scars

See the recklessness

See the survival

See the determination

 

Don’t cry

Don’t care for the worthless

Don’t pity the already done

Don’t hurt

It doesn’t bother me none

 

Would you like to know what you don’t understand?

I fought

I won

I survived

I breathe

 

Look closer

You see it?

You feel it?

You breathe it?

Freedom

© 2010 MissChild


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Great poem! I can feel the pain in this one.
Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2010
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MissChild
MissChild

Houston, TX



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