Faucet

Faucet spit out your water

Cry out the cold

Now make it hotter

Make sure the flow 

Is steady 

But I don't want it slow

Make sure it comes out crisp and clear

Make it soft and known but still queer

I want it to be heard

But don't shout it

That takes from the beauty of words

Reviews

[Jen]

Your b'ful words show that what's the beauty of the words. write when emotions flow.
thank you for sharing your poem here. keep it up!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I hardly can believe you're 12. I say this not to offend you, but because you have written a very good poem. It's alway hard to make a poem about something that so simple as a faucet for example. You've succeeded very well. Keep writing.