Equinox

Tear stained, with blood on your lips.
Forget this, mountain filled misery.
Go back to the better side of you,
be surrounded by your volumes of sand.
Desert wasteland.

Remember in this place, that there is no one season.
No dead or dying, but forever ending, forever beginning.
You are the princess not the queen.
He'll never left you forget that you have no place.
No face, you are not the one who rose above the rest.

Rain falls, you hear the desert call, but these hills entrap you.
Beautiful, abused, the villain and the victim.
Just one more sin to taste again.
 

Reviews

[Michael X]

what a journey of the senses, over the hills of the dammed and beyond, the
heart gets a sense of the wasteland that comes to life in abstract ways,
this is my kind of poetry, I loved the line
No dead or dying, but forever ending, forever beginning."
Actually I loved it all, awsome job!

[Ashley]

I like this. However, i think it should be No dead nor dying. Instead of the word or.

Nevertheless, great job. 99