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A Poem by Miss Mary Jane

Running in circles, swirls, whirls, will you wake up from this vivid dream?
A scene you are corrupted and compromised in, a separate sin.

© 2010 Miss Mary Jane


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Wow! I could envision a lot of different things with this! I like poems that are of few words but can transfer so much into the mind of the reader. I think most powerful of themes I get off this, is one of ignorant futility. Akin to the person who knows they have made a mistake, yet instead of owning up to it and resolving it, they instead, start making every excuse and effort to point fingers.

Great Lines of Ink!
Wolfie

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 20, 2010
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Miss Mary Jane
Miss Mary Jane

Knoxville, TN



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My name is Mary Jane, I'm just another character brought on to you by the gods. I believe in mystical adventures to heighten the passion of life. I like to go out into nature and worship pagan deities.. more..

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