A Feast of Friends (revisited)

I see her diamonds in hair, like a woman in the sky. Beauty surrounded epic and new. I shall tread that path and eat the stars. To be the rider, the writer of the new dawn. Accepting the challenge, willing to smile over something new. The world unfolds like beauty on the vine. Not relenting to the ghost on the desert highway. My life equals some different byways, that I've seen in visions and dreams.

The stage was set with beautiful souls that entered and joined one another. People that would have never met had they not been coerced and summoned by the fates, and I can relate to each one that passed me by, everyone that held my soul and made me sigh and smile. Now I'm writing, lacking the blues, but still racking up the rhythm for the joyful tune. Screaming, singing out of me, beautiful and traumatic, to see them out on the highway again. The beginnings of a new tribe.

I'm alone now but only in body, not in spirit. I can still feel this overwhelming astral being that captivates and holds me. I means is it so hard to what these people aspire, what they inspire in me. This fuel that alleviates me. Disintegrating into me, like acid on the tongue, in the body. These people, they kneel to me.

I've seen them all in a vision, in a scene. Alive and dead, but they are the bringers of rebirth and a new dawn. Never regret the feelings of this song, which illuminates, ignites us all. The sense that everything will be and is all right, and I give in without remorse, without a fight. Within this endless night. The eyeless night still sees, and is holds me captivated. By what is, and what could be. Limitless, and now I see.

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow- this is the best desription of earthbound souls and the seer, intentfully captivating and speaks of an inner plane, I love how the metaphorical impression bring your words to life, I see this as a vision of pondering the aspects of white light and those lost souls that enter into such at such points in existance,
you have surely captured the meaning and the delving int, the actual dynamics are absolutely abstract and artistic and the creative aspect is set on high. you've perfected this work of insight without a doubt.

[Skye Céibhfhionn]

YES! OMG YES! [smiles and jumps with Joy!]

I have to say that AGAIN I agree with Michael! This is a perfect piece and I'm in awe, truthfully! I have yet to find any poem measured as fantastic as this one, in the capture of earthbound souls. It is an impressive piece, entwined with love and compassion; an unfolding enlightenment in truth.
To reach this stage, is an euphoric sensation, where beauty resides overwhelmingly, and the Mind sees All of it, and embraces it to the Core. As you said, without a Fight. Welcome, to this Moment!
Enjoy it, and Grow Further!

This, dear Miss Mary Jane, is a complete and utter favorite!
Thank you for your creativity!

Skye