A Moment

Last night I dreamt a dream,

that flowed and faded within me.

I stood beyond this world,

on the threshhold of a new reality.

 

Watching the water, circle me,

as it flowed through the mountain streams.

Surrounding me, welcoming me home,

once again.

 

I listened to the world,

as it begged and it screamed.

I listened to the world,

as it laughed and it sang.

 

There I stood in that moment.

Reviews

[Michael X]

There is something other worldly about the meaning, like envisioning the astral.
the imagery is powerful and well written, the flow is nicely done as well.
The thought and scope of depth is captivating, awsome job.

[Silver_Moon]

Ah... a moment where everybody love to stay in that time...

Love your poem. It's dreamy and true. Good job. :)