Floating

Remembering a lost piece that I wrote forever and a day ago. I know it's short, but I feel like I reached my point.

Floating upon an endless sea.

Remember, repeat, Eliminate/Forget me.

"Believe," they whisper, closely to the sea.

Wasted, mis-placed I am.

Floating, alone for eternity.

Reviews

[Stacey]

Wasted, mis-placed I am.

Sad...

But those S's are not misplaced at all. At least sorrow is more bearable when it sounds pleasant :x

[chris' girlfriend]

such a calming poem :)