Who am i ?

Who am i ?

A Poem by Writer forever
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Simple poem

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Who am I ?

I am

Free as a fly

Grateful as a tiger

Happy as a monkey

Brave as a lion

Jumpy as a kangaroo

Thankful as a turkey

Beautiful as a Bird

Depth as a dinosaur

Growing as a giraffe

Quiet as a snail

Strong as a bear

Important as a bee

Lucky as a goose

Pleased as a duck

Clever as a fox

Determined as a eagle

Eager as a shark

Anxious as a puppy

Certain as a wolf

Bright as a butterfly

Who am I ? ME as a human only

© 2016 Writer forever


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it seems that the human and the animals are all one because the soul is all the qualities you mentioned as you went down each attribute. The only thing that would be all those things then is ME, or you, depending on what you call it. Maybe we are only human because we are one with all of these things and sometimes miss it.

Im not sure but I had to think about it, which is a good thing I loved the flow!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Writer forever

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much
We can be many things. In the end, if we are lucky. We have known love, kindness and concern. Be like a mother bear to her cubs to our world. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


The use of similes is really beautiful here. Do write more. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is lovely. You seem like a very multidimensional person. Keep writing. =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really cute! I really liked it. Keep up the good work =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


writer forever,
You are writer also

only writer can consolidate such a galaxy of
images


Carry on...

M P Ramesh

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writer forever

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Very much it is my dream to become a writer one day

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Added on January 7, 2016
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