Unhappy

Unhappy

A Story by Misha Saad

If I prioritize someone's emotion over my decisions , it doesn't make me indecisive . I thought I would bring up all the flaws and would've won it by words . But again your heartless speech was at its best. And yet my rise just drop down to the lowest . For I've being the guilt to myself . Forgiving and forgetting , the two most important etiquettes were hard on me . I wanted to grow , but the busy busting seed inside wasn't happy , I was unhappy .

© 2018 Misha Saad


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Despite some writing errors, I read each sentence slowly with thoughtfulness. I don't believe that makes you indecisive, and this story showed vulnerability of the character; this makes it compelling and believable.
An intriguing take on the feeling of unhappiness, good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Despite some writing errors, I read each sentence slowly with thoughtfulness. I don't believe that makes you indecisive, and this story showed vulnerability of the character; this makes it compelling and believable.
An intriguing take on the feeling of unhappiness, good job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 13, 2018
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Misha Saad
Misha Saad

United Arab Emirates



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