Trapped

Thanks to Thibzeyy for saying random words unknowingly, but that helped with this(:

I want it to end
It's all too much
Trapped and confined
In this enclosed hole.

We're nothing to this
Endless cycle of
Pathetic, miserable life
And simplistic, easy death.

Why do we bother?
To make some sense
Of this terror and hate
Filled world we live in.

But is it too much to ask
If we can experience a little
Joy and amusement, or
Is that against the laws of life?

I tend to find that many
Like to think of Life as a
Chance to be who you want to be.
Others think of it as Hell on Earth.

I feel it is a steel cage that
We, as the writers, must
Try and create a suitable
And excitable existence.

Everyday, I wake up annoyed
To find that I am still here
In the dizzy spiral of appalling
And shameful lies of Life.

My smiles and laughs are
Now mostly fake and lost forever
As I continue venturing through
Everyday with no escape
From this tormenting journey.

Trapped 'til Death.

Reviews

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Honesty killed the cat; if only our words could kill the violence, greed, and evil of this world, this piece could do it. 'Trapped 'til Death', indeed and with knowing that it makes my heart cry. It's okay... let's start a writer's revolution, hmm?

10/10!

[Apathy To Empathy]

My smiles and laughs are
Now mostly fake and lost forever
As I continue venturing through
Everyday with no escape
From this tormenting journey.

Trapped 'til Death.


My favorite part, though the whole poem was very well witten.

[JustASoul]

This is a brilliant piece :) So honest. Really good

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Beautiful but deadly. But no fake smiles for me please. >.