Mud

And a world away he sits, unaware of the pain he caused

He doesn’t see the tears, or even feel the hurt

He doesn’t see my torn up heart

Shredded and stamped into the dirt

 

He will not know the truth of my feelings

He will never know my pain

Nor hear my voice near him

I cut towards a vein

 

My actions he will fear

My mind he will invade

All that can save me

Is the cold edge of a blade

 

I feel so sad I can not cry

A heart that has been betrayed

My life just like a movie

The final scene will fade

 

As black creeps in and covers my eyes

I think of him and see the blood

My vision dies as I see

My broken heart in the mud

Reviews

[syrus]

great poem

[Sseoni]

Interesting poem! I really like it! Very detailed and descriptive! Immense emotion! Wonderful poem! :D

[Deepshikha]

Oh...that sounds rather painful. And your last stanza is a wonderful close to the rest of the poem.
My favorite lines have to be: My life just like a movie/The final scene will fade.
Awesome poem!