Guilt

just feelings.

Sure of  being Your breaths,

million beats a day indeed,

I failed for one as;

though all the deeds.

What's your love for,

sure i'm not your need,

you are certain of this failure,

and other many may be,

knew i never understood you,

and shall never able to see,

don't love me i plea,

please don't bear me.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

This is certainly worded differently! It seems like you are trying to be enigmatic, for the sake of obscurity. Maybe I am wrong, in my honest, humble opinion. Yet, I do understand your intent!

[Pax]

Guilt it creeps in the corner of our soul. nice write.

[Whiskurz]

A very good piece my friend......Whisk