Bird Of Prey

 She is free.

Once caged by the metal lines of societies condemned ideas.

She spreads her wings, beyond the bars of closed minds.

And soars past judgement.

And lands in contentment. 

She is bold. And she is beautiful. 

feathers once clipped by biased opinions that were sharp like shears. 

Now full and embraced and loved like the clear night sky. 

She is free.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. We underestimate freedom. Good to know the freedom of free-will and to have opportunities to accomplish great things. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[zainul]

Eloquent expression glorifies the bird of free.
It was caged but now enjoys freedom.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Freedom or release from what people think and opening your mind to explore... no matter the circumstances is an acceptance of life... the verse shows she is will to leave the nest... go forth wherever the wind takes her flight...

I saw one area of concern:

And soars past judgement.
And soars past judgment.

[DJ]

I really liked this. Great flow and I like the words you used, very beautifully written :)

[Chaos_Collector]

I love poem and what it entails. Something people fail to do is escape society's negative and break free. Elegantly written. Well done :)

[Misa ☯]

Thank you :) I am glad you agree. This is my first writing!