When You Lose Someone You Love.

When You Lose Someone You Love,

You Lose The Feeling,

The Feeling Of Hope,

The Feeling Of Love,

As The Tears Shake The Ground,

The Light Shadows,

You Miss The Touch,

You Lose A Part Of You,

Asking God To Take It All Away,

But Get Nothing In Response,

Just More Pain,

The Reason You Had To Live,

Is Gone.

Reviews

[SimplyaGhost]

I feel it. All the emotion and hurt it makes good for a poem.

[Sally.]

Thank you, so very much. What do you think I should write about next?