going.going.gone

Tears through the broken glass

 

fear in ever shadow cast

 

my life outlined on deaths window pane

 

is my life one big game

 

smiles in your face

 

cries in the dark

 

laughs at the jokes

 

but im breaking apart

 

someone there, im knocking on your door

 

open up before im no more

 

i couldnt adovid it am i not smart

 

 now im dying of a broken heart

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

Tears through broken glass should be capture in a small cup and splashed over some dying plant, to return life.
Life seems a game when there are players that spoil it for everyone. But in the end they are the ones who lose. Because they will never find love. Only temporary pleasure and eventually painful departures.
Oh gosh... you really tear me up. Its so sad...
Who wouldn't open the door? Keep knocking, because someone that cares will let you in where it's warm.

The important thing is you are smarter from these feelings. They teach us how to continue. They show us what we are really looking for.

Such a sad piece... but you are not gone yet. You are going, and going but hopefully this message is a way of pulling you from your own pit.

Beautifully sad, and in a colorful way. Which gives a strange feeling. This should inspire heroes to act.

[Madara Uchiha]

man that was so sad to hear for someone that is so loved. it sounds like u need a hug.