Remember Me

Remember Me

 

When am gone remember me

In the morning mist and gentle breeze

While sounds of butterflies whispers

Will give you the warmth of my kiss

As nature captures your eyes

Birds will bring soft melodies of my lullaby

And the smell of my skin embrassed

in every rose you see

And in your lonely dark nights

While looking at the sky above

Ill be the brightess shinning star

Filling your soul with hope and love

 

Reviews

[Rahul]

Ahh,....you touched and got a path of my heart indeed. This piece's incredibly penned and it's very sensible, beautiful. lovable, awesome and wonderful enough as well. I'm rreally damn speechless here what to say and how i can give you my honest and nice review for youse this piece...so, i've decided to give you my hug...a magic hug..:P
50000/100, you deserved.

[Babbette Francis]

Beautiful print, Beautiful color, Beautiful meaning.
What a peaceful and beautiful write!

[Candle in the wind]

Lovely appeal and it's indeed a blessing to be remembered and to be perceived in such a beautiful way.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful sentiments expressed in this succinct and thoughtful write. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[forfila]

What a thought for a lost love to remember you by.

What a series of loving thoughts well penned in a beautiful poem, it sounds like you are one with the collective heart and this is a beautiful place to be.

[Ashley Campbell]

This was cute, reminded me of those poems you find in cards. I mean no offense, it's a compliment I assure you. While reading this piece, it gives one a warm sense of feeling and yet it feels so slightly melancholy for the fact that perhaps the narrator believes they'll be forgotten when they die and thus wishes to leave their loved ones a simple note to never forget. All and all, it's nice. A pleasant read.
Well done=)

~
Silver Wolf