Moan, Baby, Moan

A Book by Mirth

Two incredibly unlikely heroines in the midst of a zombie apocalypse.

Chapters

Chapter II

© 2009 Mirth

Author's Note

Eh, so. Just a chapter. I return the favor if you review~

My Review

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Anotherfakeface

Way to make mine look crappy :x
I like the news description, and the character realism.
I love Emily's optimism versus Roses pessimism.
Although, I don't know about you, but I've no idea where city hall is around here >_>
You make me want to rewrite mine sooner over later.

Oh and I really like how you made the characters so... realistic.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Hedra Helix

I really like this, it is detailed but sparse too, you trust your reader, that's dope. More?

Posted 15 Years Ago

Love the title. Very witty, especially based on what the story is about. Hell, I'll admit that before I looked at the picture I thought it was going to be about something else...Ha.

Your style of writing is one that most people don't have. Other writers prefer to get straight to the point, but you linger on detail. Of course that's a very good thing. And you say it's just a chapter, yet you've already formed the characters very well.

Brilliant write.