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Waltz of the Damned

Waltz of the Damned

A Poem by Mirrl
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Symbolism, one of my favorite things, I hope you enjoy! Also Very short.

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Waltz of the Damned

Brendyn O’Donnal

Their feet shuffle

To the dark and silent music,

Of their own actions

The hurt and pain that makes their ears bleed

Begging for mercy

Begging for heed

But no one listens

And no one cares

They listen to the music of their fears

They try to escape this forever dance

But no one

But no one

Escapes the Waltz of the Damned

 

© 2011 Mirrl


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Great title. An illuminating display of fear through dance. Lovely imagery. It is well written. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Mirrl
Mirrl

Provo, UT



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