Scream

The yelling, the screaming, the pain and the bleeding, when will it stop? Stop, im in a war with the ones i love, the pain hitting me like a bullet in my chest. Chest, where my heart lies as i stand here with the fear in my eyes. Standing here hard as a stone, feeling like im in a world i cant rise above. So i close my eyes and fly to a place where im loved.

Author's Note

check for spelling and see what i could do to make it better :) thanks :)

Reviews

[Thea]

Aw...That is quite emotional and sad...You put a lot of powerful emotions on this one...I like the domino effect on this piece, I'm referring on the last words on every sentence...I assume this is your first poem, right? It was great! You should keep writing...
:)))

♥ Thrin ♥