The Limit

Short poem, first one I've written. I enjoyed the feeling of it and thought I'd share. A pretty straight foward poem.

Everyone’s time runs out, that's a simple fact.

To say I never loved you would be insane.

You had my time.

I let you borrow so much.

I watched the clock tick, every minute of it.

But I wanted you to have it, every tick of the clock.

Until you left.

That’s when I noticed.

I

Watched

It

Fade

Away

Just

Like

You.

Author's Note

Don't mind feedback & critique just nothing to strong please I'm completely brand new and not looking to do this professionally or anything of the sort. :-)

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Don't worry frnd, you did fantastic. It's a beautiful one...Well sorted out....You are a thoughtful girl and talented too.....Keep writing this way.....

[Monday Parker]

I really like this. Your style reminds me of my own. I like how it fades away...Means so much more than the words. Its the motion. A feeling...Great job.

[mackenzi_drew]

Sounds good. Keep writing more :)