Let me Love You

Let me Love You

A Poem by Mira ThePoetess
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Even if it's to touch the untouchable, or to dream the unrealizable, let me love you.

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   Let me Love You

Let me love you even if it's between myself and me
Let me love you in my dreams just for a while
If I can't change my life then I'll create my fantasy
If it's the only way to make me smile

Let me love you, I know you'll never be mine
Won't try to make it real, you're untouchable
Let me love you in a world of dreams it's fine
As long as I know you'll remain unreachable

Let me love you and write a few poems of love
Let the passion carry me far away
Let me dream you're mine it's quite enough
Just promise me this won't drive you away

For so long all I've tasted was bitterness
Now you've given me a shining spark
Let me out of this lonely emptiness
Let me out of my fear, it became so dark

Let me love you just for one dream baby
Let me dream you for one more night
All my dreams are suspended on a maybe
Maybe this choice is the only one that's right ..
©

Mira


© 2014 Mira ThePoetess


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Beautiful and powerful poetry for the want of love.
"Let me love you, I know you'll never be mine
Won't try to make it real, you're untouchable
Let me love you in a world of dreams it's fine
As long as I know you'll remain unreachable"
Sometime a taste and dance is enough. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Let me love you. Just peak for it self. Wonderful, beautiful. gentle and full of love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful and powerful poetry for the want of love.
"Let me love you, I know you'll never be mine
Won't try to make it real, you're untouchable
Let me love you in a world of dreams it's fine
As long as I know you'll remain unreachable"
Sometime a taste and dance is enough. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem filled with emotion of love...keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel this, very much. I really liked it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

Thank you Nina :D
It's amazing.
It is such a beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

thank you so much
reminds me of the ancient concept of chivalry. Pure love, chaste and unburdened with selfish fulfillment. Still, how can it ever truly be satisfying?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

it never is ...... Mark ... it's another kind of torture .... thank you for reading my friend
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kar
Such a wonderful piece. "For so long all I've tasted was bitterness
Now you've given me a shining spark
Let me out of this lonely emptiness
Let me out of my fear, it became so dark" I can relate to the aforementioned quote on many levels. This was such a pleasure to read and the accompanying music complimented this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

Thank you Kar I appreciate it. Glad you liked it
Love this! I think the majority of us have been in that place at some time or another - where someone's so far out of reach the only way to be close to them is through dreams or fantasy! Beautifully worded, had me hooked the whole way through. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much MagicAL .... appreciate your review it sure touches me to the heart

Fascinating, quality piece, vibrant and lyrical.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

Thank you Mystery Trails for your review ... glad you liked it :D
Hauntingly beautiful ... I know this love, it rests gently in my soul.

Peace and Blessings

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mira ThePoetess

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sharonlee ... hope your love finds its internal peace

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