Torn

If we only knew what fate would be hiding for us .... would we have changed our choices?

Torn

I close my eyes to dream away
I thought I heard you call
I close my eyes and sway
I stagger and watch myself fall

I reach out for you in despair
You're nowhere to be found
Abandoned me in my scare
Losing my solid ground

Baby I'm torn… So torn apart
Agony running through my veins
It's driven deeper into my heart
Can't break free off these chains

All I have is a wounded memory
A recollection of your voice
Just an incomprehensible theory
Leaving me repressed with no choice

You say you're doing it for my sake
It's only a matter of time
You wanna save us any heartache
Oh baby what you're doing is a crime

What you're doing cuts both ways
We're both hurting and the pain's rough
I know you're still mine despite the frays
Baby I 'm begging you enough

Here I am and my love's got no pride
You try to keep yours under control
I might know what you're feeling inside
But you're hiding never letting it show

Believe me I'm not that strong
Pretending is all I can do
But I can't keep it for so long
I'm so helpless without you

Loneliness is corroding me alive
And I miss you like crazy
Love me…Bring me back to life
Pull me out of a doubt so hazy

Baby I'm so torn without you
This I'm not pretending
I'll keep my love throughout you
Doesn't this torment have an ending

Breathe some light within my soul
Breathe some faith within my heart
Hold me close, make me whole
I'm torn.. so torn.. I'm falling apart

Mira

Author's Note

Reviews

[EmilyBianca]

Such an emotional piece. It's beautiful, one of the best I've seen on here.

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you so much I appreciate you taking the time to read me :D

[EmilyBianca]

anytime :D

[Saddam]

Baby I'm so torn without you
This I'm not pretending
I'll keep my love throughout you
Doesn't this torment have an ending.

Ah dear.... Beautiful poetry. Well crafted and beautifully done your job.

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you so much my dearest SSADD :D

[Art Sun]

this is a very emotional write...heartache can be a devastating part of separation...nice work...

[Mira ThePoetess]

thank you Art ... it is very true yes ... devastating

[lissalovesyou]

Amazing! I loved the last stanza!
lissalovesyou:)

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you so much Lisa

[Tate Morgan]

One of your best so far dear

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you Tate ... well I am grateful to you to send me most of my readers .. and it was through you that I've joined this wonderful community of writers ... thank you

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome dear and such a good friend

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thanks Tate .... :D

[SallyDM]

Another triumph, Mira. You express so eloquently the pain and emotions of rejection and love, I relate so well to your poetry. Thank you for sharing.

[Mira ThePoetess]

Woh ... thank you for reading me .. it's a pleasure to see my poems can touch others . don't we all find ourselves somewhere in others' lines ?

[SallyDM]

We certainly do ...

[Ashley Griffiths]

This is a very touching piece about the agony of love.

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you .. I believe it is really painful ..

[wordman]

a most beautiful and touching write with the graphics and music all came together to form this

[Mira ThePoetess]

thank you my friend

[wordman]

you are welcome and a gifted writer

[A Soap Mess Stories]

It can be hard to know what is right...we all wish for better fates, but if I knew what my fate was, I probably wouldn't bother trying...great write...

[Mira ThePoetess]

thanks for reading and yes we must try and nobody can tell what tomorrow may bring and if we knew then we still would want to change things ... human nature

[Relic]

You've written this with such elegance and emotion. There is a inner pain within your words that is evident.

Ah, if we only knew...the world would be perfect I guess. "If wishes were changes there'd be no goodbyes."

Nice poem Mira.

[Mira ThePoetess]

thank you so much for your review ... :D

[Relic]

It was my pleasure Mira.