Moment with Nature

ღ Moment with Nature ღ

Whenever I can’t find myself, losing it without a trace  ...
Whenever I Can’t recognize the features of my own face  ...

 

I find me in the middle of a chimera and a fantasy

Tasting some sweetness I could touch and see …

 

I fly within my imagination in a limitless reverie

Dwelling in those places where nothing would leave me

  
No love story concluding with a man’s goodbye

Nor a dream ending leaving me with a tear in my eye

 

I drown in a union with nature with the power to cure

Healing with its spiritual serenity and a sensation so pure

I hear sighs in the air whispering that I shall meet happiness someday

I hear the murmurs of plants calming me and sending my worries away.

 

All my features have been altered along my wasted years

Enough sadness to fade my roses with all those fears.

Yet, I can see, far in the distance, a certain smile, despite the crying

I shall seek , in the corner of my heart, a certain memory that might be dying 

I'll give it life, maybe it could create anything among my madness

Or write some stories that would still end with a trace of sadness

 

But leaving me some smiles along with the mourning

Some night regrets, that wouldn’t fade with the morning 

 
Maybe the sun will enlighten my path, and myself I shall retrieve  

Taking my mirages towards a concrete reality in which I still believe. ©


ღ Mira ღ

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.

Reviews

[KAin]

A pensive, thoughtful piece. There's a wonderful simplicity to it, that, even though it was written with rhyming couplets, make each line sound like it's own distinct thought - the poem as a whole seemed like a compilation of ideas that merged together to form one picture, and it managed to be a complete one.
The poem feels like a moment of musing while the wind whips around you...
It does indeed give the sensation of having a personal moment, surrounded by nothing but nature.
Nice work, Mira.

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you Landred .... love your review man ... :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and story.
"Maybe the sun will enlighten my path, and myself I shall retrieve
Taking my mirages towards a concrete reality in which I still believe. ©"
I like the flow of story leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[aditya gawade]

A really nice poem! i loved it! Itz written in a very nice manner. The rhyme is nice and melds perfectly with the poem. You also seem to have managed to convey an ambivalent idea through this poem.It's really nice and Quite a feat. Great piece of work!!! :) :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I found this very touching and elegant. I think it's rare that such imagery driven words can be captured in poetry, but you penned it well! Brava :)
-QuanaWana

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you so much for your review :D glad you liked my poem

[Frontier]

Eternal in it's elegant simplicity, Nature will always be our solace. :)

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

Some find spiritual serenity in nature and some blame it for the traces of sadness. Healing is a power and a sensation indeed...Bravo........

[Mira ThePoetess]

Thank you for reading me Sami ... appreciate it really .. and you said it wisely some only see the traces of sadness ..... anything can be healed only if we look positively to things that happen in our life.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)..........................