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A Poem by DoctorX
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No matter how short it may be, it will paint the entire canvas within your head.

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And the moon,
Perched on the water's mirrored surface.
Broke into the unwavering glow of a thousand fireflies,
Dying the water red.

© 2015 DoctorX


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DoctorX
I know this is a short poem but I hope you like it. What do you guys think about it and got any suggestions for a title?

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Dude some of the best and most famous of poems can be smaller than yours. what matters is the strength and imagery portrayed by the words. If you ask me your a natural poet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DoctorX

9 Years Ago

I guess you're right. Thank you :)
That really boosted my confidence

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Added on April 29, 2015
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Hello~! v(OwO-) You may either call me DoctorX or Mirai. Despite the fact that I am sort of at the lowest point right now due to a health issue,writing is always my escape and I love to express my f.. more..

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