The Melting Of a Heart.

Magical it is,
Magical it has always been,
Setting hearts on fire,
Melting them to gold,
Unbridling the joy,
Like in the stories it was told,
When you pull up the corners of your naked lips,
Into that beautiful Smile..

Reviews

[Ana B.]

What an endearing sweetness....magical indeed :)

[Mirab Irfan]

Thankyou Ana :)

[R Smith]

great work Mirab you took a smile from something simple and created poetry in the curve of lips that can light a room, well done :)

[Mirab Irfan]

Richard,I'm really happy you liked it.
Thankyou so much :)

[Tom McRoberts]

Wonderful stuff here, Mirab. Great imagery, can't wait to see you explore it more!

[Mirab Irfan]

Tom,you're very kind.
Thankyou so much :)

[wordman]

and magical it is,a great write

[Mirab Irfan]

Thankyou for your kind words :)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A beautiful balanced poem describing how a mere smile can affect life itself.

[Mirab Irfan]

Thankyou John.Glad you liked it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awwww Beautiful Poem. Adorable write my Friend!

[Mirab Irfan]

Thankyou so much! :)