The Melting Of a Heart.

The Melting Of a Heart.

A Poem by Mirab Irfan

Magical it is,
Magical it has always been,
Setting hearts on fire,
Melting them to gold,
Unbridling the joy,
Like in the stories it was told,
When you pull up the corners of your naked lips,
Into that beautiful Smile..

© 2015 Mirab Irfan


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Hahaha. this is amazing, its short,simple and quiet romantic

Posted 7 Years Ago


A simple and important thing described in a beautiful way.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

8 Years Ago

Means alot Zesshan :)
Thanks for appreciating!
A smile can do miracles, very true. Thank you for sharing, well done. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Rudi,thankyou so much! :)
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Oh that is just beautiful

totally

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Thankyou Nisreenaa :)
Awesome piece my friend! There is nothing more beautiful than a smile... well except on evil people haha... awesome work and pretty smile on your picture as well :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Haha.Thankyou so much Aaron! :)
A smile is never beautiful if its straight
No one meet people on straight roads
When we have have a smile curved
Like a curved road for instance
A curved road is far more bigger and greater than a straight one
More the curve more the friends you have on the road
Surely great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Your review is highly appreciated.Thankyou Ashwin.
I read the poem many times, and understood each line but, I do not know if I am receiving the author's message correctly. I do not know! Taking the gold and melting it down and then reshaping it into something beautiful like the example with the lips into a smile.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

True that,Perkele.A heart melts into gold when it watches a beautiful smile :)
And thankyou s.. read more
oh wow...nothing more passionate than a beautiful smile...

the grin that can melt chagrin.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Jacob,let me be honest,the inspiration behind my poem is you.
This happened after reading ''c.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

wow thank you for letting me know that...i am encouraged if my words can inspire such a write as thi.. read more
Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

You're welcome Jacob and Thankyou for making me write something like that!
My heart has always been melted by a smile and you expressed it so well. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Haha.You're welcome.
And thankyou so much Willard! :)
A really interesting and beautifully written poem. One could never really think there could be so much to a smile. Amazing poem! :)

Magical it is,
Magical it has always been,
A nice way to start the poem and a very touching description. Whoever you wrote it for must've been on cloud nine after reading this. Beautifully written. :)
Setting hearts on fire,
I like the depth of this simple sentence. It's such a sweet way of saying how their smile kindles love. Amazingly well-written. :)
Melting them to gold,
This struck me as another way of saying ''I'd die for a smile''. Nicely written. :)
When you pull up the corners of your naked lips,
Into that beautiful Smile..
I loved this part. It gives life to the rest of the poem. Great lines and the perfect way of ending the poem.

A really, really excellent poem. Keep up the good work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mirab Irfan

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much Bushra.
Your review is always highly appreciated by me.You really motivate m.. read more
Bushra Naqshbandi

9 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)

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Added on April 26, 2015
Last Updated on April 26, 2015

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Mirab Irfan
Mirab Irfan

Multan, Punjab, Pakistan



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