Tears in the Rain

Do you like rain? Do you like it when you could no longer differentiate between tears and rain?

I sit and watch

the rain falling

from the sky so cold and grey.

This season

just like my life

even I can’t fly.

I’m tired of being hurt

tired of these tears,

Tired of being alone

all these years.

Hoping to get peace

and a little love.

Hoping to break free this curse

and fly above.

Author's Note

Hello people, this is Mira and it's my first post. This poem was written way long back so I hope you guys like it. PS: Constructive criticism is always accepted. :)

Reviews

[Rebecca Garber]

This is a very powerful poems, as I read it. As i read it I am in an emotional state, and it brings an uplifting spirit to me. So Thank you very very much.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I like the way you expressed the feeling of being sad while its raining. But for sure nothing lasts long not even your pain. Soon you will find your joy and happiness in rain. I love rain⛆

[Mira]

That was the plan Sky to show that even rain can be seen two ways and thank you for wishing me happiness and I wish you the same. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome Mira :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad journey in the poem.
"Hoping to break free this curse
and fly above"
I liked the hopeful ending. I liked the honest thoughts and emotions shared. Thank you Mira for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

The ending is the dream of so many. Well said, great flow and emotion. Tyfs!

[Mira]

Thank you so much Van Dyke and yeah the ending is definitely a dream.😊

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome, Mira.

[Manasa.L]

Its very good and not bad for the constructive part.
I liked the way of framing the words; very emotional. Those words Hoping to break free this curse, HA I hope you break it. A very good writing.
Keep writing

[Mira]

Thank you so much Manasa. And yeah like everybody else I m too bounded by something and hopefully your wish come true.😊

[Hebe]

Very sad, simple but very effective emotionally.

[Mira]

That was the plan Hebe 😊 and thank you so much for appreciating it

[Rimmee]

Dear Mira, I liked the style of this poem. It's very beautifully carved. And I really liked the line '
Hoping to get peace

and a little love.

Hoping to break free this curse

and fly above.'

[Mira]

Dear Rimmee thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it. :)