WingsA Story by Minoru KusariA short story that just kind of flowed out of my mind all at once. It is the spiritual successor to another short story I have called "The Forest". Please read and tell me what you think!Wings He
was running. He
ran to get away from it all. He ran to escape the mundane, the mediocre, and
the monotonous. He ran with all his might, as fast as he could. No longer would he
stare at the backs of others, struggling to keep up. He ran faster and harder
than all the rest, because he had everything to lose. He had long since
abandoned the path through the center of the forest. He ran right through the
forest, no longer afraid of the darkness, the incessant fog, the ghastly
shapes, the barren, dead sky, nor did he fear the ghoulish fingers that reached
for him, eager to sink into his flesh and drag his bloody body back to the
path, or devour him in this abyss with no light at the end of the tunnel. The others had
told him not to. They asked him “Didn’t you see what became of the Woman who
Searched?” His answer? No. He had not seen what had become of the woman, and
neither had anyone else. She had decided to search through the forest, for
what, only she knew, and she was swallowed by the darkness. No one knows what
became of her. No one knows what happens to those who left the path. Now he was no
longer a child. He was a young man, and he had finally understood why the woman
had searched. Now he was searching, though he did not know what he searched
for. He only knew that it could not be found in that path everyone so
desperately clung to, afraid to even lift their eyes from the lifeless grey
soil directly in front of them. All his life he had been led to believe that
that was the only way, the only path. But recently, he had been experiencing
things that the others did not seem to experience, or at least were too afraid
to mention: he believed these things were called “Dreams”. So now, the Man
who Dreams was dashing through this forest shrouded in uncertainty like a
leopard across a wide open plain. He often tripped or crashed into obstacles.
Some barely hurt, others hurt him badly. At first, these obstacles frightened
the young man. He had never had to deal with obstacles so unpredictable before;
the ones on the path all had solutions or other people who had already done the
same thing before him had left behind clues. Here, in this forest that seemed
to be ever-changing, there were no hints, no clues, and no predecessors. This made him
wonder: Had he ever really done anything
before now? Had he ever made an impact? The man kept running, kept
dreaming, and eventually a clearing in the forest appeared in the distance. He
ran towards this clearing, and then he saw--could it be?--yes! It was light! The man ran
despite having lost his breath long ago, despite the numerous cuts and bruises that still stung, because right now, he didn’t care. He wanted to search, he wanted
to dream. Suddenly, the same
ghoulish, dark, claws that had taken the Woman who Searched reappeared from the
foggy darkness behind him. They rapidly approached him, again sinking their
claws into his arms, legs, abdomen--anything they could reach. Despite his fear
and pain, the Man who Dreams kept running. He was now sure of
what he was running towards. Now, he had exited the forest and the land before
him led uphill towards a cliff that overlooked the Ocean. Oh, what a wondrous
sight! He had never experienced such a thing before. The sky here was a bright
clear blue, with the sun shining. There was lush green grass, and an myriad of
colorful plants he had never seen before. The air smelled of life. But the hands
still chased after the young man. They had stretched outside of the forest, so
many of them--perhaps hundreds. The man kept running towards the cliff, and
suddenly, he didn’t even fear the hands anymore. They began to dim and wither
in the bright sunlight of his resolution, his hope, his Dream. One by one, the
ghostly figures began to die off, disappearing into the air, perhaps
overwhelmed by the radiance of the man’s dreams. Or at least, he liked to think of it that way.
He ran, now only a
couple hundred feet from the cliff. He knew what he had searched for, and he no
longer had any resentment or regrets left. The few surviving claws of darkness still pursued him without rest, as though agitated that a person had escaped their grey illusions of “society”, “stability”, “order”, “success”…Reality. The Man who Dreams
had reached the end of the cliff…and jumped. He soared through the fresh air
high above the blue expanse of the sparkling sea, allowing the Wind to carry
him. He closed his eyes, and from his shoulder-blades sprouted a pair of
brilliant white wings, their feathers glistening in the sun. He began to fly,
and he opened his eyes and laughed and cried at the same time. He reached
higher and higher up into the sky, confident that he could reach his Dream.
Confident that after all he had conquered, after all the struggles and torture
he had endured, and all those who had tried to discourage him--all the
naysayers could say whatever they wanted! Just look at him now! Just try and tell me it’s worthless now!
Just try and take this away from me! Try and take it! You can’t! You can never
take this from me! It’s a part of me! You called me ignorant, naïve, arrogant,
childish, and foolish! What do you have to say now, now that I soar above the
clouds over the great blue?! Try to deny it! Try to deny ME! Can you deny ME? What’s
wrong? You were all so loud before, you all seemed so content to crush me, mold
me, and make me fall back in line! Now I’ve chased this Dream! To find life,
and pursue my own path! The Sun has shone its brilliant light upon me! And I made
it out alive…and I wouldn’t trade it for a thing! “You proved us wrong. You proved us wrong.” He
could almost hear them say. I’ve learned what I desired, I have reached
my Dream, I have renewed my existence, my being--MY LIFE! All I have learned, felt, and experienced will
keep my spirit soaring above the skies…for Eternity. At that moment, a
pair of hands forcibly tore his wings from his back, streaks of blood following
the feathers through the air. He began to plummet towards the Ocean, and he knew.
He fell towards the Ocean with a smile on his face, the tears on his face
stinging his eyes--or was that perhaps just the salty air? Now, the time has come to unite as One. May
the soothing cool blue Ocean accept me and wash away my pain. The Man who Dreamt
splashed headfirst and was immersed in the stream of consciousness, where he
could Dream eternally alongside all those who had dared to Dream while his
spirit and legacy continued to soar above the clouds. © 2012 Minoru KusariAuthor's Note
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Added on September 21, 2011 Last Updated on March 19, 2012 Tags: wings, allegory, metaphor, short story, experimental AuthorMinoru KusariMDAboutI'm in my late teens. I'm a pretty laid back guy most of the time, but I get really passionate about certain things. I like to play guitar, video games, draw and read. I love music. I've always liked .. more..Writing
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