Spectacular love

Spectacular love

A Poem by Mino7Rocker

I sent my feelings with a candle on a river,
As i watch it float away..
I'm no longer a dreamer,
I shall be heartless, starting today..
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Or maybe that's what i thought,
Because I'm starting to doubt,
Or is it a disease that i caught?
Because my soul is crawling out..
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Meeting you made me realize,
All my feelings got replaced with one..
A new smile in my life to rise..
A new story had begun.
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I'm becoming a person that i'v always avoided
You're giving me a chance to live again.
You're that one thing that i never thought i needed
About pain, there's no need to complain
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The sound of your breath got me addicted..
The way you say your words leaves me breathless..
In your love you got me surrounded..
I'm dazed from this craziness
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You make me smile like an idiot..
You make me laugh like never before..
The crazy thing is that i like it..
I love you, i can say no more..
-------**-------
Come what may,i will love you
Until the end of time..
That's what i aim to do..
Even if it was a crime.
-x-M!nO-x-

© 2014 Mino7Rocker


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It was really a Spectacular read I feel. Your feelings for love are really going strong. It was a delight to read this, thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mino7Rocker

9 Years Ago

thank you so much, i really appreciate your review
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Years Ago

Welcome friend..
I can really relate to this! I am in love right now and this is completely how I feel! And I started to love this person right as I gave up on love! This is a great poem! Good Job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mino7Rocker

10 Years Ago

it's crazy isn't it ? wanting to give up.. thinking that you won't ever feel that way ever again.. t.. read more
YourMajesty2102

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome! Love is a crazy thing!

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