Unwanted intentions

When darkness covers everything,
When The corner of the window is the only light..
Thoughts in my head starts dancing,
Just like every empty night..
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Cruel memories are haunting me,
Or is it the other way around?
Same words same images rolling repeatedly.
Taking over my sight,creating this wonderland.
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Not sure what kind of feelings am i having,
Or if i was even feeling at all..
Am i just feeding my cravings?
My heart isn't a place for you to crawl
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I'm,sorry but i might be faking some feelings
But yet I'm not really sure..
I don't mean to be deceiving,
But i'm obviously not your cure
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I don't want you to end up as my doll,
I'm just one heartless greedy
Because loving at my state is impossible,
Gaining my heart will take eternity.

-x-M!nO-x-

Reviews

[Claire in VA]

Incredible write! First of all, I love the divisions between stanzas. That, along withmr the font, is visuallyto appealing. I loove the narrator's honesty throughout.If he is open with his partner abput hpw he feels, then all should beb good. At night, when things are quiet and still and darkness takes over, most of us contemplate the current situations that are going on at that time in our life. Many of us over-think at this time too.

I don't like to suggest edits because poets choose each word purposefully and for good reason that I, as the reader, may not know; however, were this my poem, I'd consider changing "starts" in line 3 to "start."

I think this work earns an A++!!

This is the first piece of yours that I have read. "I'm new." :) I look forward to reading many more!

~Claire in VA

[Mino7Rocker]

Thank you so much for reading my poem, i look forward for more reviews ^-^ please suggest me to read your writings when you post any so i can return the favor ^-^
Thank you again