i'll kill you for what you did.

i had.. a bad.. relationship.. :

I went through all that pain,

and watched you stare,

it's not like you care,

so why are you even there,

this anger im telling you,

i can not tame,

try and repair me now.

for all these bruises,

all this pain i can not contain,

i will make you explode,

and you'll just watch me stand there,

without a f*****g care.

Reviews

[Placenta]

I can understand the point. a very blunt, sad point.
But the rhythm is a little off. And the rhyming pattern is off too.
But enjoyable.
Good write.
-Placenta