The Jerk

To a boy who played me. :

I thought i liked him,

then i thought i loved him,

and now im in pain because of him,

i thought he was fine,

and i thought he could be mine,

but i guess that could have fooled me.

I guess im the fool.

Maybe i should've never liked him,

neither less love him,

i fell into a puddle of blood,

mine,

i feel like im falling,

just falling,

into a never ending hole.

Until I reach the end,

I guess i'm just going to keep falling,

untill someone in life catches me,

which seems like never again.

 

Reviews

[.Bunnie.]

Aww crap, was this poem written about the same guy from "How much I really love you"??? :P I was rooting for you two!

Once again, an adorable piece that I know we can ALL relate to. We've all had those not-so-smart crushes about guys who are jerks. (And I'm sure the boys have had them about girls, too! It goes both ways.) Either way, there are plenty of fish out there in the sea who would be more than happy to be with you, and actually deserving of you! :) Good luck!!

[Tori]

Guys suck sometimes, don't they? Anyway, it's a great poem, the message is very clear and it was obviously good for you to write this--I can tell that it must have been very therapeutic to get those thoughts out. Good job! :)

[Frank F. Atanacio]

well written-- Ii was indeed a clear message and somewhat heart felt and heart delievered
thank you for sharing it...