Lucille

Poetry

Like a rattlesnake, she approaches
Graceful, but dangerous
Reluctant but anticipatory to her entree
Seduction, her Forte

Making promises of blissful ecstasy
Wrapped around her arsenic entwist
Her tongue producing stone melting melodies,
As if stone melting melodies exist

Where she lay shaped like Infinity
Incantations disguised as words,
As i try to protect my dignity
My flesh like a mighty god;

Wallowing deep into black oblivion
I have sold my soul to lucille
Even with the allies of a hundred centurions
I am powerless against her will:

Wicked but sweet
A beautiful creature
ravishing but evil
A wonderful mixture

Author's Note

My first poem. please tell me what you think

Reviews

[Claire's-Girl]

Very, very dark. I really liked it, it was well written and captivating in the original descriptions.

[Loney tunes]

though i have my reservations, Wallowing deep into black oblivion
I have sold my soul to lucille
Even with the allies of a hundred centurions
I am powerless against her will: this is sick