critical mass

critical mass

A Poem by Shaun Rudie

we've become so

critical,

expressing our

"rightness", our

"order", over others

I didn't ask

you don't know my

best path if you don't know

me

- and I haven't shared

and I think, by your

critical gaze,

I shall not

© 2011 Shaun Rudie


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Added on February 28, 2011
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Shaun Rudie
Shaun Rudie

Tampa, FL



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