your eyes

your eyes

A Poem by Shaun Rudie

I can't look you in 

the eyes

not like I want to

without your permission

it would be like

kissing you

and we aren't there

not on the surface

underneath…

explicit mystery

the eyes would

share

.

.

well,

maybe just a

peck

© 2011 Shaun Rudie


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Wonderful.... one of the best i've read in a long time.
~lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ha ha - Great!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Shaun Rudie
Shaun Rudie

Tampa, FL



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