Observations at parkA Poem by Shaun Rudie... mother with child restrained impatience the kid wants to swing I have other things to do I tap my foot, push the swing it doesn't go any faster, this time thing I watch around me, the other kids, a man or two, no prospects so far I push the kid ... they've chained a picnic table to a tree surely, so the tree doesn't get away ... a man sits on a bench like a lump waiting for lump stimulus actually, "waiting" is too active a word to describe him mind apathy ... it takes all kinds and it takes little squirrels digging holes in the ground to safeguard their nuts out here, the nuts roam freely, and we increasingly accept them as the norm generally, our "stretch of imagination" shortens our need for external preoccupation lengthens like soft shadows near sunset such, the light soon fades and all is "without" save for the spark of joy from the imagination of a child playing in nature, a bright chid, announcing her discovery of the back of her hand amid the polite nodding from an uninterested grandfather - his grandsons are playing after all this bright child creates the world she sits next to grandpa, you can feel her comfort how often are we this close to such bounty and realize it? he lies back on the slide she mimics and he is still unaware unbeknownst to him she brings him comfort the grandsons challenge, test she connects it takes all kinds © 2010 Shaun RudieAuthor's Note
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Added on October 17, 2010 Last Updated on October 17, 2010 Tags: park, imagination, adult, child, world AuthorShaun RudieTampa, FLAbout5,000 words a day. Yeah, really. I challenged myself and met the challenge for 8 days straight. I write about it, and the craft of writing, here: http://writeku.com I have a novel here: www... more..Writing
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