Challenge

Challenge

time and the silver in

my beard

a hug, warm enough to

heat metal, holds me still

feather pressure on

wind

a blue hat box, what is

inside?

lace panties

heartbeat at rest

and against my mood, 

your smile….well quite simply...

my insides light up

Reviews

[Toni Prehoda Kahler]

I enjoyed this piece --- from mood to mood-lift, the sensitivity of the sensual images, all fit nicely withing your last lines. My favorite line: "feather pressure on/wind" "Like it!